Get real dude. Over and above these things, the story sucks. Xxx sex Totally looks like a kid trying to show off with words. Please. Vortex party? And then you use then when you mean than showing a serious lack of a command of the language. Meredith had trouble moving through without people pillowing themselves on her ass. Are you aware you ended your comment with “dude”? Warren cubicles. What??????????? And then some stuff just doesn’t make sense by any definition. You would do yourself a favor by pulling the story so that it isn’t associated with your name. Vortex party? Seriously, it is THAT BAD. Are you aware you ended your comment with “dude”? It wouldn’t be my first choice of words but its understandable, and yea, he had some mistakes,
