The story theme and context is quick and jerky, as to his drunken-rage anger and quickly to a more caring, thoughtful father. Xxx video The story has merit as Jake has softened; Phoebe might accept him as “the one” in her life!Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-07 17:07:23s1m3bg Really appreciate you sharing this blog post.Really looking forward to read more. The plet/theme of the story is great, the characters play their parts were well, and the story is pretty much error free! Where’s Jake’s wife? The author can give more detail and descriptions of the characters, i.e., names, ages of each character, and details of the much needed foreplay–gentle, loving and sensual, but not abusive–and follow through to the completion and after-glow of the consummated sexual play! The author can give more detail and descriptions of
