12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2008-11-25 22:13:07Change story ending to him bringing his buddies over and her telling them to fuck her as much as they canREADERReport 2006-08-02 22:06:02thas right fuccr keeo it goinREADERReport 2006-06-15 14:37:46Nice job, Jess. XXX There simply is no substitute for studying proper English and learning proper grammar, spelling and syntax, even if it bothers some of the horny readers who have the IQ of a turnip.READERReport 2006-06-14 17:18:24prologue goes at the beginning
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