They ALL need work.«1» Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? Porn But, you are a very talented writer. You simply need to work on delivering what you relate in a more legible manner.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-14 17:37:13You’re a very talented writer, and I understand that it must be damn hard to write about something like that. There are many more errors, as well, but the worst offense is inconsideration of your reader who must struggle through your story. There are many more errors, as well, but the worst offense is inconsideration of your reader who must struggle through your story. thank you.jakthemessiahReport 2009-08-18 21:41:42Dude… Would like to hear further adventures.
