slow down. Porn if we all wanted to blow out loads fast we would jerk off/finger bang our selfs to pictures. not take the time to read somthing and enjoy it«12» you need learn to use paragraphs. also spell check is there for a reasonREADERReport 2007-05-20 17:29:58Actually two of the people that complained of spelling errors misspelt a word. dont just rush to the sex scene. (our selfs) But they weren’t writing a story now were they?READERReport 2007-05-20 09:23:27Shall I point out the irony of the reader who commented on the spelling, yet spelt “potential” incorrectly?READERReport 2007-05-19 15:42:513reasons why this sucked
1. slow down. 10 comments«12»READERReport 2007-05-21 02:35:21no eroticaREADERReport 2007-05-21 01:52:10Alright, we need to have a talk. 3. You need to slow down, alot! (our selfs) But they weren’t writing a story now were they?READERReport 2007-05-20 09:23:27Shall I
