So don’t be an asshole and actually give the guy credit. XXX 22 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-19 00:30:07kind of hard to post a second chapter to a story you stole ISN’T IT loser.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-17 09:45:36@Below
Fuck off, you dont need to get at someone with caps flowing all over your comment. So don’t be an asshole and actually give the guy credit. Grammar Nazi.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-12 21:34:08needs a rewrite and a good editor way to many STUPID ERRORS that you should have caught IF YOU HAD PROOFREAD THIS which you obviously didn’t.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-18 12:36:52A few spelling and basic grammar errors, but much more importantly, it flowed, and the plot was amazing, so yes, another part would be advisable.anonymous readerReport 2011-06-14 08:19:50yes another part is in order«12345»
