Some constructive criticism though, don’t abuse the thesaurus, your prose seems very unnatural when you work in all those fucking synonyms.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 15:34:55I fucking died
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Best XNXX story of 2013anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 15:06:47If I may be honest, this isn’t really one of your best…sort of like a pornographic take on that film Jack Frost.«1»
