I liked yyour story. Not to sound like some English teacher, but it needs some fleshing out. Sex video 10 comments«12»m1990Report 2016-03-13 15:34:27Love itanimal99Report 2013-03-26 22:38:43if they can’t sign their name to a comment, then they’re just bullying and not offering any real help. But I agree in that it seemed too short. And yes, I DO teach English.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 00:01:24Seems like it was written in 10 minutes by a 10 yr old.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-24 20:42:01It’s just plain stupid to say that there is a unisex changing room at a public pool.«12» It shows a plot and good story-telling skill. Not to sound like some English teacher, but it needs some fleshing out. Not to sound like some English teacher, but it needs some fleshing out.
