You’re doing good. XXX Keep it up and please continueREADERReport 2007-02-17 06:05:20Let’s face it, and I’m not being mean to the author: This is a very average story. One request–please “don’t take the girl.”READERReport 2007-02-17 21:43:25hey i loved it ! Go Cowboys! 6.5/10READERReport 2007-02-17 01:36:06There is such a thing as a spell checker…USE IT!!! Even though it didn’t have any sex it in it, it was still extremely good! One request–please “don’t take the girl.”READERReport 2007-02-17 21:43:25hey i loved it ! It could be a lot better. It’s not a great tale of sex and adventure. Everything sounded good until the Chase character ended up being a sadistic rapist and killer. One request–please “don’t take the girl.”READERReport 2007-02-17 21:43:25hey i loved it !
