Unleash The Taboo: A Steamy Compilation Of Forbidden Family Lust, Scissoring And Squirting In Raw Passion

You have numerous spelling and grammatical errors which should be obvious to you when you proof read your work. Not perfect but a very good read ! Porn I admit I didn’t make it even a third of the way through this story. 17 comments«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support and I am currently working on the second part of the story and it is looking to be pretty good. Way too choppy and hard to read. You have numerous spelling and grammatical errors which should be obvious to you when you proof read your work. Other than that, good job. With that being said, you definitely need to proof read your work before submitting it, or else have someone do it for you. 17 comments«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support