If you want to improve i really suggest reading lots of other stories along with trying out odd postions in your storys. Xxx hot video Sorry bout that peple. Sorry bout that peple. I tried to delet my older one because I edited it but that didn’t work out so I posted another one.READERReport 2006-05-31 18:24:52I loved it, keep up the great work, i really liked the depth in which u described the whole event, not too long, excellent!«12» I’ve never submitted a story before so I’m just now learning how this works. If you want to improve i really suggest reading lots of other stories along with trying out odd postions in your storys.
