NemoReport 2013-10-29 07:16:21I enjoyed the story. XXX NemoReport 2013-10-29 07:16:21I enjoyed the story. Also excited . . . …NOT exited. . …Silas88Report 2013-10-31 11:04:54Very good. Also excited . . . …NOT exited. . …Silas88Report 2013-10-31 11:04:54Very good. Keep it up and keep writing, please !JuzBrowzinReport 2013-10-29 04:12:42Great story and hope to hear more from you on the “discovery” maybe even a thread.«12» 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-11-01 14:59:50A hot read but went way too fast. Keep going posy moreCapt. Thanks for sharing.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-30 22:32:53Bump all that proof reading write your story in word then cut paste here. I rate this story a 5 out of 10 as it could have been better written… NemoReport 2013-10-29 07:16:21I enjoyed the story. Keep it up and keep writing, please !JuzBrowzinReport 2013-10-29 04:12:42Great story and hope to hear more from you on the “discovery” maybe even a thread.«12»
