Lacking detailed sex scenes. Xxx hot video Lacking detailed sex scenes. Your sex scenes were rather lacking, but your actual story was quite well done. Overall, not bad. Honestly, I’d say lose the sex and post it on another site.«1» Honestly, I’d say lose the sex and post it on another site.anonymous readerReport 2012-07-30 04:00:54Great. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-20 02:06:30SAME STORIE AS PART 11anonymous readerReport 2012-08-01 13:26:52This is the same as 11anonymous readerReport 2012-07-30 16:20:59Just finished reading. Overall, not bad. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-20 02:06:30SAME STORIE AS PART 11anonymous readerReport 2012-08-01 13:26:52This is the same as 11anonymous readerReport 2012-07-30 16:20:59Just finished reading. Lacking detailed sex scenes. You obviously watched the show, as did I, and it shows in how well you do your characters.
