you should read more. bad spelling, wrong words being used. Porn inane plot. My spell checker comes says the story is fine.READERReport 2005-02-01 08:14:19Good story, really weird. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-02-01 08:27:26Good story, a little too much horror and too little sex. terrible. just terrible. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-02-01 08:27:26Good story, a little too much horror and too little sex. you should read more. Thivai can’t even spell his own complaint.READERReport 2004-09-07 19:02:17terrible writing. terrible. inane plot. i do nnot see how this is a sex story.it is scary.«1» i do nnot see how this is a sex story.it is scary.«1» you should read more. bad spelling, wrong words being used. My spell checker comes says the story is fine.READERReport 2005-02-01 08:14:19Good story, really weird. inane plot. again, just terrible.READERReport 2004-04-07 00:42:48Wow, really good combination of sci fi and
