Good story with just the right amount of “tease”. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2007-11-18 19:36:38NEEDS PART TWO!!!READERReport 2006-10-01 12:49:30good job but next time you should set it up more and use some more detailsREADERReport 2005-10-11 10:41:55I will never go into a hotel lobby without looking for the lady in the red dress. Porn movie Good story with just the right amount of “tease”. Wish I could meet and talk with you.READERReport 2004-11-19 19:02:38good one very good short but good i really liked it the only thing i need now is a sequal very nice work«1» 4 comments«1»READERReport 2007-11-18 19:36:38NEEDS PART TWO!!!READERReport 2006-10-01 12:49:30good job but next time you should set it up more and use some more detailsREADERReport 2005-10-11 10:41:55I will never go into a hotel lobby without looking for the lady in the red dress.
