And as for Adamon, at least Zafar Ullah tried… Was pretty interesting all in all…careful with extra long paragraphs they are hard on the eyes :)«1» Good try tho. Porn 5 comments«1»READERReport 2005-07-09 06:13:22Keep on writing, interesting as a wholeREADERReport 2005-02-23 11:08:55My 8″ strap on will really make you wet.READERReport 2005-01-06 07:30:20THIS SHIT SUCKS WORST THEN A HARRY POTTER BOOK!READERReport 2004-10-12 10:51:37Great story. You did ok but you need more practice with sentence structure. And don’t worry about the grammar, you’ll learn. And don’t worry about the grammar, you’ll learn. Good try tho. You did ok but you need more practice with sentence structure. Was pretty interesting all in all…careful with extra long paragraphs they are hard on the eyes :)«1» Good try tho.
