16 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2012-03-07 23:43:04paragraphs are a must for any storyanonymous readerReport 2012-03-07 16:56:41paragraphs are a must for any storyanonymous readerReport 2011-09-21 15:39:06Your story was good and the sex was hot, but it was hardd to read. Do you remember English class in school, grammar was a huge part and is needed to make your readers understand what you are trying to portray.It may take longer to write, but it makes a better story to read. Xxx hot Read the story yourself and I am sure you will understand what I and others are telling you. Read the story yourself and I am sure you will understand what I and others are telling you. Please write a part 2.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-30 05:20:43paragraphs make reading much easyer«1234» Please write a part 2.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-30 05:20:43paragraphs make reading much
