This is full of misspelled words and incorrect grammar. If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you. Xxx video This one is so poorly written that I stopped after a few paragraphs. If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you. You still have a few mistakes, but it’s still good.«1» You still have a few mistakes, but it’s still good.«1» You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before. If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you. If you are going to write, learn about what constitutes good writing.
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BB Shorty / Monica Hole
