Stop for a bit and do the ideas, sketch, develop, write, REVIEW system of developing a complex story. Sex video Apart from that, it’s brilliant«1234» Keep the stories coming, just take the time to ensure continuity isn’t destroyed.Bry83Report 2015-09-11 22:09:42These were all good stories but the problem is the confusion of it all for a first time though it is a bit of a easy mistake to make it would be nice to see the series redone to where everyone understands it all & also continue the series.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-03 01:55:14if these last two chapters are supposed to carry on from the first two, you have really stuffed up something shocking, does not have anything to do with the others,Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-12 15:33:02I’d like to give it a positive rating, but there’s too much discrepancy
