I should be able to turn another part soon.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 19:35:26This is utter and complete shit, yet you decided to write another story after this. remove all the greek names it is to confusing.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 17:16:11For those you are complaining, I will write again and proofread my stuff. XXX Since its grammatical errors is the issues, that is fixable. I should be able to turn another part soon.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 19:35:26This is utter and complete shit, yet you decided to write another story after this. For people like reader JJ than I will write again. Since its grammatical errors is the issues, that is fixable. Really, don’t hold back, hit them hard you moron!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 12:22:26totally agree with other readers, crap, gave up after first paragraph«12»
