Mostly it was a good story, and I agree, more background on the amulet, and more detail. Also, I agree with the exclamation mark thing. Porn Was a little over used. I like the basics of it thoughanonymous readerReport 2011-04-11 03:37:17It wasn’t horrible. yeah, as a guy, I wouldn’t wear something like that…Ellen340Report 2010-07-06 17:37:33I thought your story was pretty creative and interesting. A little rushed at the end. A little rushed at the end. Thanks for your time and efforts writing it.«12» More detail would have helped but overall it was a good read. I like the basics of it thoughanonymous readerReport 2011-04-11 03:37:17It wasn’t horrible. Mostly it was a good story, and I agree, more background on the amulet, and more detail.
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