It’s why I write scifantasy. Porn movie “First person shooter” is inside their head, using “I did” “I saw” “I broke his neck.” A lot of people tend to forget which mode they are writing in.And yes I’m a nerd. Maybe while hiding in the bushes, he mutters to himself and uses his own name, that way it’s not “He’s a man, oh wait, now he’s Arealam.” It does go kind of fast, and the characters don’t really feel real. “First person shooter” is inside their head, using “I did” “I saw” “I broke his neck.” A lot of people tend to forget which mode they are writing in.And yes I’m a nerd. Usually I wait for an introduction, or I have the character talk to himself.
