I do really enjoy your story but the lack of good English takes away from your story. with some help please.Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-26 06:39:29Lol. Xxx hot I do really enjoy your story but the lack of good English takes away from your story. what a shame, I was enjoying this up to the last 3 chapters…Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-28 14:55:24I would highly recommend you get a good proof reader. 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-20 10:15:22@djb: Getting jealous are we?djb8247Report 2015-08-29 03:23:09It now seems (to me at least) that you have definitely lost the plot, too much going on, and now it seems to be just sheer unadulterated, PURE RUBBISH. what a shame, I was enjoying this up to the last 3 chapters…Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-28 14:55:24I would highly recommend you get a good proof reader.
