Your use of language and spelling are so bad that it makes reading it quite painful to me. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-15 12:57:58Spell checker would definitly help also checking grammaranonymous readerReport 2013-06-13 09:17:22I’m sure I would have liked your story if I could read it. Xxx hot video I am sure it is not English. You just need a proofreader in my opinion.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-13 06:48:44holy shit, sounded great to me at the beginning, near the end I couldn’t stand trying to make sense of it please revise this, or at least make the 2nd chapter tons better than this one because I couldn’t make heads or tales of the story near the endanonymous readerReport 2013-06-13 03:07:42looked like great start to a series however it was soo hard to read, angel to angle, smock as smoke, and
