4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-04 10:31:19paragraphs are to long stupid plot and no end all equal a half assed job. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-04 10:31:19paragraphs are to long stupid plot and no end all equal a half assed job. Porn movie either do it right or not at all now delete and rewrite.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-28 18:10:26ANOTHER WANNABE WRITER THAT PROMISES A PART TWO BUT FAILS TO DELIVERanonymous readerReport 2010-08-19 15:07:44I was also thinking with the same idea that have been given by the other person that she should accompany her brother for camping and have lots of sex experiences. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-02-04 10:31:19paragraphs are to long stupid plot and no end all equal a half assed job. Keep writing.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-19 13:34:24ok but to short this was a lousey place to end it also since the mom was
