Not only were there spelling mistakes and grammar errors, the story lacked substance. Xxx hot video At least try not to have the whole story a load of bs.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-19 16:08:33I can’t believe the previous comments that is was a good story. At least try not to have the whole story a load of bs.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-19 16:08:33I can’t believe the previous comments that is was a good story. C’ mon get real. Not only were there spelling mistakes and grammar errors, the story lacked substance. C’ mon get real. It was not a good story and the writer needs to do a lot more practicing before resubmitting if he ever wants to be a good writer.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-18 12:30:47good story made me rock hard the same thing sort of happend to meMuckerReport 2010-12-17 14:45:34Good story
