Please don’t let her get pregnant, that ruins a good story and it’s not a secret anymore. . Xxx sex . . . …Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-04 18:05:08good start…i agree about the switching between the 1st & 3rd person…you should also be a little more descriptive with what they are doing to each other…makes a story go a long way…but i liked it…got me a little wet thank you!«1234» Please don’t let her get pregnant, that ruins a good story and it’s not a secret anymore. . . . . …Anonymous readerReport 2009-10-04 18:05:08good start…i agree about the switching between the 1st & 3rd person…you should also be a little more descriptive with what they are doing to each other…makes a story go a long way…but i liked it…got me a little wet thank you!«1234» you might wanna put a bit more caution to spelling
