I especially liked the fact that you weren’t too graphic with the sex and let the readers imagination fill in the details.READERReport 2005-07-25 04:57:41awesome but spend more time on the sex!«12» I especially liked the fact that you weren’t too graphic with the sex and let the readers imagination fill in the details.READERReport 2005-07-25 04:57:41awesome but spend more time on the sex!«12» 6 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-06 10:23:30gfhghgjhjjREADERReport 2006-10-06 16:51:47Oh yeah because sushi is a major turn onREADERReport 2006-03-22 01:05:14not bad but u need 2 strech out the sex part a little bit. . Porn …after all u are posting ur story on a porn website a little bit longer and it will be goodREADERReport 2006-02-05 01:24:37A perfect followup to part 1. I especially liked the fact that you weren’t too graphic with the sex and let the readers imagination fill
