You clearly have a talent for writing; keep with it. Porn My bad. You clearly have a talent for writing; keep with it. The comment was snarky, and was trying to act like it was a constructive, when it wasn’t. Sorry I snapped.klaxxReport 2009-11-20 15:37:43My earlier comment was based chiefly on YOUR comment, dwduck. Frankly, I didn’t read your story all that closely, chiefly due to the god-awful spacing – it’s hard to read a wall-o-text. Still, the commenter you were blasting, dwduck, made some valid points – and you addressed them. Constructive criticism: try double-spacing between paragraphs and lines of dialogue. I’d like to be perfectly honest and say that, it upset me that the comment left by the other reader was mostly complaining about little technical things, and that they
